BLIND MAN (Acrostic and Ottava Rima)

by ECILA ice   Aug 23, 2007


Been living in a world of plain darkness
Light has been deprive in his solemn eyes
Immortal sun died with its sweet caress
Neither the mere light rays bid its goodbye
Dead living alone in cursed madness
Myriad nights he's bearing a deep sigh
Asking why god made him suffer this way,
No way to escape abyss everyday

i did a little experiment and combine two kinds of poetry..hope u like it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aisha

    Nice poem, flowd well, the mix was kl! good stuff!5/5

    Aisha

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem has superb atmosphere. It is short but very powerful. Every line is effective and you wrote it greatly. I enjoyed reading it. Well done! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem has superb atmosphere. It is short but very powerful. Every line is effective and you wrote it greatly. I enjoyed reading it. Well done! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    It was short but very meaningful.. it express well and has a deep meaning word by words.. great job5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    loved the wayt it is written
    what exactly is an ottava rima though
    i know acrostic lol but yeah nto sure of the other
    but great job on the poem
    tis wonderfully written

    Keenan

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