WONDERFUL YOU

by ANDRE AQUINO   Aug 23, 2007


Stars are falling down,
Scattered all over town.
Gorgeous as your eyes,
Shinning awfully nice.

Lessen my loneliness,
Caress with your tenderness.
No one can ever compare,
With the charming love you've shared.

Sweet voices of you,
Makes me wonder to forget adieu,
Listening to your lovely song,
Gratify me to live along.

Your enchanted touch,
Captivate me to notch,
A saccharine kisses that last,
To forget my dimmer past.

I'm flying like a dove
Coz I'm falling for your love,
Stay in my side and be my God
I vow to our love so don't make me sad.

I'll tell you how beautiful you are
That you healed my heart and cured my scar,
Your guidance helps me to survive
And continue to cling and keep me alive.

This is a chance of a lifetime
like a worth of a man to his bloodline,
With all my heart I want to say I love you,
And someday I hope you love me too.

Composed by: GIL ANDRE R. AQUINO
vote for my poem.. thanks a lot guys.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    another great piece, i see more rhyming, you conquered more attention that really great..i see effort..every lines suits for attention..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jess

    Great poem. I love it. Keep up the good work 5/5

    xoxox
    Jess

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Truly beautifully written love poem with greatly expressed emotions and wonderful imagery. My favorite stanza is:
    -Lessen my loneliness,
    Caress with your tenderness.
    No one can ever compare,
    With the charming love you've shared.-
    5/5 from me
    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Woohh... kababayan, galing nito ah... kakainlab... nice choice of words...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautifully well written..enjoyable piece to read..well done..the poem was so emtional..
    *thx 4 the comment*
    -sarah