Rain Poem

by Melissa   Aug 23, 2007


I wish the sky would sprinkle
her morning dew
upon this thirsty land
before the green fades away
or worse yet
dies all together

She must long to cry
but feels strength
is more becoming of nature,
our silly sky forgot
might is partly weak
when it refuses rightful tears

Shielding sobs
behind fluffy white clouds
and blue air
may seem invulnerable to her
but mostly it just deprives
every-living-thing

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kitty kat

    Its really deep i like it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    This was an excellent write,great imagery ,you turned a simple subject into a beautiful piece of art,well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautifully written poem, imagery is great and you created wonderful atmosphere. Well done! You deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by swill

    Might is partly weak
    when it refuses rightful tears

    ^^ Wow, have you grown older! Lol...I mean wiser!

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    I love the first stanza.
    Great piece about the rain.

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