Jesus(acrostic)

by Michelle18   Aug 23, 2007


Just the person I need to talk to,
Everytime I feel I have to hide.
Secretly healing my inner self,
Undoing the hurt thats deep inside.
Sending me his love,for everytime I've cried.
.....................................

this isnt my best...but tell me what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem. It is original and you expressed emotions excellently. Short but till very effective. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I think this is a good poem although not your beat work it sounds good. Add more rhyming qualities and it will sparkle. :)

    Tc
    Fsams

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