Summer Days

by Michelle18   Aug 23, 2007


Sitting on the front porch,
As the gentle breeze goes through my hair.
I take one deep breathe,
And just begin to stare.

Stare at everything in sight,
From the playful children to the hot sun.
Hoping that this beautiful summer,
Turn out to be full of fun.

This is a time to just relax,
And forget about school.
Clear everything from your mind,
And take a dip in the pool.

I hope you understand what I'm saying,
You could have fun this season in many ways.
So lets sit back and enjoy the warmth,
Of these beautiful summer days.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Atmosphere is interesting and imagery is great. Emotions could be better expressed. This poem is good but it isn't excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short and sweet poem. I like th epoem very much and it has good rhymes plus its very well penned. 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short and sweet poem. I like th epoem very much and it has good rhymes plus its very well penned. 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Uhmm not very interesting to me. lol. but it has a good flow so 5/5 :]