Mother is what your not

This poem is so sad.
Very emotional
I think the flow of the poem is a little stressed at times but otherwise it's an awesome poem. You had very good word choice and I think a lot of people could relate to it.
5/5
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Hey this is so sad and touching...

"I cry myself to sleep at night
Wondering, what if id died
So i sit here in my corner
Ready to give my life to suicide "

^^ very emotional...

one suggestion.. make all the i's capital
also,
"so i ran and i hid"
so I ran and hid... sounds much better... but thats just a suggestion..

overall a nice write... keep writing..

This is so sad,
i wish it could have been different for you :[

but you wrote this wonderfuly, i really felt the emotion.
5/5

Ahh. This was very hard to read.. I hope you won't abused liek this when you were little... by your mother.. that would be terrible. this poem all in all was really good.. you expresssed your emotions very well yet again.. however.. you had some spelling mistakes.. i realize you spelt probably wrong a few times.. so maybe you'd wanna check that out. overall, great job 5/5

Great poem... i enjoyed reading it...