Second chances <33

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Aug 27, 2007


I know you hurt me
even though you said you never would
but i guess I'm a big softie
you never know, this could be good

you explained to me what you where going through
what caused you to place this pain upon me
you promised you where always true
and never meant for this pain to be

you asked me if you still had a chance to get me back
and at that moment you took away all the pain
i really wasn't sure how to react
but i knew that everything was about to change

i understand everyone makes mistakes
and hope people will be able to forgive
with this one you caused a heart brake
but with you back to help me through i think i can live

so i guess what I'm trying to say
is i will give you a second chance
but i hope never again you will betray
and we can rekindle this romance

*im sorry this isnt my best piece. i would love whatever constructive criticism you have, just be nice <33)

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  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    Wow...this is really good...I had a similar situation, only..the guy never came back. ='[
    But i love it anyway...yer a really good writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow I am so sorry you had to go through that...I can really relate to this poem.....well done

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ken

    Great job with the poem n if you dont mind could you read sum of mines n tell me wat chu think

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    You are an amazing writer.
    this poem is really amazing.
    & i can completly relate to it.
    its very real.
    5/5 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Honey

    Gooood oneeeeeeee