Winter's Beauty {{acrostic}}

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Aug 28, 2007


Wonderlands of white crystals,
Inching on the windowsill
Nothing is more luminous
Than the glistening snow;
Every flake so delicate and unique,
Rendering lightly in the breeze,
So slowly, so softly.

Bedazzling those below,
Etching this scene into memory,
As all frolic in new Winter's arms,
Ushered into melodic harmonies,
Twirling to the rhythm of
Young ones hand in hand.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Wow! This is beautiful. Acrostics are hard to pull off in my opinion, and you did so with elegance and seeming ease. A wonderful write, with great word usage and imagery. Really made me want to be out in the snow! Bring on Winter!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wonderful poem. I love acrostics!!!
    The imagery used was beautiful and painted a lovely picture in my head. I loved your word choice. This poem was so desciptive and the flow was excellent.

    Keep it up! 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Excellent descriptions! Very well done on this. Amazingly written and excellent word choice. I enjoyed reading this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    You have mastered the art of an acrostic. Simply fantastic. The imagery was amazing -- I kept picturing everything in my mind. The flow was great && the word usage was amazing. Magnificent job. :]] 5.5

    - Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Well done this poem is definately unique and awesome
    xx