I Love You (Part 7, The Love Series)

by Corruption   Sep 1, 2007


My feelings for you ,
Should be so obvious.
Who else writes poems,
Just to make you smile.
This series of love,
Has been written truely.
I want you to know,
Just how much i love you.
But i have a feeling,
That even my series does not,
Show the true extent.
My eyes are clouding,
As i write the ending.
They cloud with tears,
Not of sadness,
But of joy.
I love you,
More than i have anyone,
So please hear the love in these poems.
And now The Love Series will finish.

**This is the last part of the title sercet, the next poem
is not really part of the series
but it will give away the sercet for those who have not gotten it yet.... hope you all liked them**

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  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    Ok i red the others..

    BUt id have to say this one was probably my favourite of the series!!

    EXCELLENT.!!

    *Hunny*

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    I no you probably should read the first of a series first haha. But i thort id comment on this after i red it..

    Its a wonderful poem & i promise that by the end of this poem there was a simple tear rested under my eye..

    It showed great talent & it had perfect understanding..

    I loved it!! Well done & keep up your wonderful poetry..

    *Hunny*

  • 14 years ago

    by Aubrey

    This is one of my favorites.
    It sounds like it was written straight from the start.
    It is expressive and I think you did a wonderful job on it.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem and I like the way u hav used the words. Keep writing and sharing

    5/5
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    I loved this poem, keenan you are so talented. This seriously made me tear, the way you wrote it. Hmm, it's so pure and heavenly. It's as if you put out all your emotion into this series. I loved all of them, but this ending, this last part. This said the most to me, it's amazing keenan. You are amazing, you're so incredible.

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