Her Glass Heart

A hansom boy and a pretty girl
a bond of friendship
that meant the world

her hair shined like the morning sun
his smile glowed like the shining stars
they each had a secret
that took their feelings far

a simple infatuation
built up inside of her
tears streamed down her face
and her vision was now blurred

tears of joy or tears of sorrow
she was just too confused
she couldn't sort her feelings
but this friendship she just couldn't lose

he was falling for her too
and confused just as well
unsure of his emotions
unsure of how he felt

her eyes sparkled in the sunlight
he watched the sun shine down on her beauty
& the wind blow through her luscious hair
he gazed upon her nd felt her personality

they told just one soul
unfortunately, untrustworthy they were
rumors spread around
emotions mixed ndd stirred

the rumors spread fast
soon both of them heard
they confronted each other
and she spoke her words

"Here is my glass heart"
she handed over her most prized possession
"please do not break it"
& he ,too, had a confession

"I'll care for you always"
a promise, there, he made
"i would never break your heart
i would never leave you strayed"

happy for a while
too good to be true
he began to have doubts
unsure of what to do

in the end, on a treacherous day
he shattered her heart
in the worst possible way

rivers and rivers of tears
shot down her face
as she slowly watched
her glass heart break

her tainted memories forever lie
her tears will always fall
ever since the day he left
she simply lost it all

-i have another poem thats sort of like this.
its called once upon a time.
i read it over one day. ndd didn't like it that much.
so this is kind of like. a rewrite of it.
rate nd comment please.
ill return the favor. :]]