She Will Be Loved (Villanelle)

by Bryan   Sep 3, 2007


She Will Be Loved (Villanelle)

She walks the streets at night, nowhere to go,
Man to man she wonders, full of deceitful cries,
Sorrow in her heart, on her face it does not show.

This pain that she feels. only she will know,
Cold is her heart, bleeding from these lies,
She walks the streets at night, nowhere to go.

Lost in this world, on her her knees she bends low,
Praying to god for forgiveness, take away her disguise,
Sorrow in her heart, on her face it does not show.

Sleeping near a dumpster to get out of the snow,
She will be loved, even if its only in god's eyes,
She walks the streets at night, nowhere to go.

Wishing she could just send this pain below,
Memories still linger, reminding her of goodbyes,
Sorrow in her heart, on her face it does not show.

The pain that she felt, only she will know,
Man to man she wonders, full of deceitful cries,
She walks the streets at night, nowhere to go,
Sorrow in her heart, on her face it does not show.

A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa. The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This piece was quite the sad one Bryan but none the less an enjoyable read. I loved the title, Maroon 5 really good choice. The emotion you portrayed was deep which is what I love about you poetry, you always put meaning within each word. Well done deserves a 5/5. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Sad and touching, but beautifully written. Well done with this form. Its one I haven't tried as of yet. The rhyme and flow was excellent and the imagery, perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww, this poem is really sad and it's filled with lots of emotion. I really like it a lot. The flow of it was great! You really have a way with words. Keep on writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    Excellent job on this Villanelle . LOve the imagery.Yet another one I need to try my hand at.
    ~CLAP~CLAP~
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    you did a great job
    must have taken some work to get it to work out
    with the restrictions this poem has
    well good job
    it was wonderful

    Keenan