Edited stories to make lies

by Veamm   Sep 5, 2007


Edited stories to make lies

I'm a messenger, a storyteller
and i can also be your friend
share with you my statements
my stories turn to be a legend

Pay attention and listen carefully
don't stop your senses to respond
hear the false truths of my prodigy
the climax of every edited stories

complete silence is what i need
and shut down the lights of curiosity
hear lies came out from my tongue
and let me prove my capable ability

You could blame anyone for trusting me
if that thing can make you happy
You can't make me down or kneel for you
its your fault for trusting my boo

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  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Ahhhhh... You are sooo good. WOW!!!
    I love it.. YOu have such a way of expressing yourself. You are so talented. I am excited to read some more of your poetry...

    -- by the way thanks for your comment

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    This was great, i loved every word of it, the way you expressed it was perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Are we all not story tellers of some type. I like the topic that you have chosen to write about. It is indeed very interesting and provides much truth in a sense.

    Another wonderful write...

    --Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    You have a talent bro...keep it up...i want you topics and idea how to write...great...5/5 ^_^ pinoy rocks

  • 16 years ago

    by Vintage

    Wow! This is so good. :].
    5/5.

    xxo