Self pleasure

by Veamm   Sep 5, 2007


Self pleasure

I gape around,i notice much graze
this terrain breathing heavily
chaotic and curse from all over
grasping up, holding steadily

i can hear voice moan roughly
saying that i feel like dying
enough saddle, so much burden
my whole body is now fainting

yet darkness covered those minds
provoking them to make shame
cheering, smiling and laughing
feeling like its only a game

the entire mankind greed for pleasure
while mother earth endured the pain
divine forests and sacred nymphs whine
for the realms ruined and now in vain

humanity did far for the so called future
for the dreams that they wanted to claim
selfish and intending to be invincible
having total power is what they aim

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  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    I think that your poems are definitly out of my league because im not getting them at all, you are a fantastic writer and i am jealous that i dont understand it great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    What an interesting topic to write about. You speak so much truth and the reader can only agree with you.

    Making has become full of greed and through all of our enhancements, or advancements.. we are slowly killing off mother nature and everything that she has provided for us.

    --Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    This was very good and you did it on such a intreasting topic...Good job...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Again nice write, a few grammar changes and it would be perfect. Great topic, nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Tol ang lalim...hehehehehehe peo im agree with you...5/5 ^_^ great writer.....pinoy rocks...

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