Eternal Obsession

by Wallace   Sep 7, 2007


Souls of the deceased wander in confusion
Inviting all mortals to the portal of death
Enchanting spells for the departed heart
Relinquish emotions and devour insanity
Varnish the senile with graces of vile
Destroy all dreams and hopes of plea

Perpetuity exposed unveiled in sin
Ordained inhumanity enters abyss
Eternal wisdom obscured by dawn
Portrayed in lust whilst stained with pain
Deceived with fiction and hidden debris
Desiring obsession drenched for me

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  • 14 years ago

    by James Nappo

    Very unique and distinct style of writing; Bravo, I'm extremely impressed by this! Keep up the good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, this was great. Your extensive vocabulary is evident by your careful diction. You picked the perfect words to capture the darkness of this poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Well-written and dark. Too much word-play though. Kills the poem because it makes it look like you've tried too hard.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chase

    VERY INTENSE POEM!!! I enjoyed it very much!!!! I love the way you make something so dark and intense so... hypnotizing!! Very well written!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    A great poem, really well structured and full of abstract and literal meaning nice job xxx alex xxx

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