Something now

by Veamm   Sep 8, 2007


Something now

Transform paints into emotions
and reverse the soothings sides
make it more pleasing to the eye
hide, conceal the happy sides

happy moments on nature's wrath
and giving oneself a working mind
to believe and ride on your dreams
shoot the stars,have peace on mind

the same expression on the paper
with unchanged topics on my hands
boredom is not my enemy anymore
but taste flows penned by my hands

fill trash cans with cracked ideas
disposed all,bury it and burn now
rock your body and shout it loud
read, I've written something now

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  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Good imagery. Some errors yet does not overly mess with the flow. It's a little different with the content giving it more of a...dark and sadd-ish undertone that adds to the atmosphere. I like how the first line instantly grabs attention. The ending also goes nicely with the rest of this piece.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hmm.. i really like this poem, great imagery, i thought of several things...a painting, a poem, a story..nice!!
    5/5!
    mezmeryz

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was well written, worded well and flowed pretty well too.
    Sad and emotional, yet hopeful and uplifting. Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Eagleman

    Superb

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