Writing poems, folding letters

Wow this is a really great poem.. and i really enjoyed reading it.. i can relate to this one a lot.. i def wish I could go back to better days..

Take me back
Till I was writing for simple fun
When my friends were always there
And love only has begun.

Just thinking of times like these put a smile on my face.. unfortunately time changes people and everything around us..

Let me hang out
Without alcohol and the drugs
We all got along
When we weren't suburbia thugs

That is an amazing stanza.. a lot of us don't really realize it until we stop to think.. but drugs and alcohol really change people.. takes away their innocence I guess and really changes people.

Your poems really gets me thinking and that's what a good poem should do. Great job on this one. You have a good point. Nice job 5/5 =)

Aww i can completely relate.that is the poem i wanted to read now because i feel nostalgy. this one expresses this feeling so well.
repetition of this request "take me back, take me back to simpler times..." is good here, emphasizes the nostalgy u feel.
and how you combine
real things like:
"alcohol and the drugs",
feelings:
"When my friends were always there
And love only has begun. "
"One without depression, without pain "
and beautiful metaphors:
"Let me feel the gentle caress
Of the tasty autumn wind
Entertaining my mind
With simple fairy tale make- pretend "

this stanza about wind really blew me away.

all in all, i think i know this feeling of disappointment and regret when life is getting too complicated and seem too wrong, and you start to miss simple but such precious things like friendsip, sincere love...

and back to images in your poem. these two: "autumn wind" and "folding letters" are so vivid. the sound of gentle wind, the sound of letter paper being folded reminds of something old, something from the past and something you miss.
the only thing i can criticize here is rhythm: in 2nd stanza it's a bit off. you might change it for something like:
by Raindrops

Take me back into a simpler time
One without pain, without depression
Just when we all thought
We were fighting the oppression

Take me back
to me writing for simple fun
To my friends who were always there
And love that has only begun.

but that was just a thought. it's ok the way it is in the poem.

ok it's 5/5

This was a very reminicent poem. I really enjoyed the emotions you portrayed in it. Everything was so raw, and this poem gave me an insight on how you view your past. Very good. 5/5

Great poem =)
nice flow

Cuz we all know tomorrow gonna be better
I don't know it was cool when I was
Writing poems, and folding letters.

i lvoe this poem i know how u feel i wish i was a child everyday i wish everyday my mom wasn't bipolar depression etc. i relate and give it the best vote good work