Short poem.

by damont   Sep 8, 2007


Lionized for his achievements
gave his all for his redeement
loved just for a brief moment
but he learned to live a life of reason
inside himself he came to an agreement
discuss everything before speaking
but no one foreseen this
he was destroyed by his appeasements
split personality came out screaming!
the next step was bleeding
did he give up his goals or is he dreaming?
in the end death was his split personality final achievement

my second short poem. tell me how i did. any ?'s if u don't understand it let me no i answer them

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    Good poem. I didnt really understand the begining two lines but than later on in the poem i got it. keep up the good work:]

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    It's interesting and I like it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Thanks for the comment :]
    I liked this poem. It was long enough to have meaning and short enough to keep my attention. I think I understand it. :P
    There was something about it that I really liked.
    <3
    Ciao~

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