This life

by damont   Sep 10, 2007


The problems in this life are hard to bare
we live in a world of images which begins to tear
sometimes at the souls of those who just can't find their identity
lost in this world of bigotry
trying to fit in even mimicking what they see
never realizing they lost their self esteem
eating disorder! depression! and suicidal dreams!
living day by day begging for death or so it seems!
your looking for a way out of your lonely despair
even thinking no one cares
sometimes hating your parents but loving the world
near the end emotions mixed and swirled
then finally death comes to your door
a friend comes and proves all your thoughts
and ways of life wrong
takes away the cares of this life
now your happy with little strife
this is the ending of those who wait
for their day of help for their own sake

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  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Very well written poem Damont. :] I could relate to this. I think this would be a cool rap/song. lol If you could do that. :P
    Keep it up!
    Ciao<3

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Great poem.
    i really like it. i can definitly relate.
    our world has been so corrupted.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    This poem is like a wake up call to everyone who reads it (atleast that's what I think) that our world is falling apart everyone is trying to do what they believe the world wants but it ends up hurting everyone in the end... i really loved this one great job

  • 16 years ago

    by kimberly

    Yes! can Relate with the family thing! :)

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