For Those That Care

by TGR   Sep 11, 2007


For those that care
I go to my room to cry
For those that care
My old life's slowly fading as soft as a lullaby

For those that care
I'm trapped in this world where no one knows me
For those that care
I'm tired of acting

For those that care
I try to put on a smile, I really do
For those that care
It's hard when no one's there to help you

For those that care
My heart is bleeding onto this bed of ice
For those that care
My life isn't made of sugar and spice

For those that care
I'm holding on with a single thread of light
For those that care
I'm fighting this with all my might

I'm staying alive
For those that care

T.G.R.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xbxdrfntx

    Hey this poem is soooo cool. i can say the same. very very good job. excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by halfwaytoinvisible

    Awe. . . this type of feeling always
    has a way of getting to lots of people.
    sad, but keep moving forward.
    good job+

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew Betts

    Rose,

    THIS IS OUTSTANDING WORK!!!!
    Quote - **For those that care
    My heart is bleeding onto this bed of ice
    For those that care
    My life isn't made of sugar and spice

    For those that care
    I'm holding on with a single thread of light
    For those that care
    I'm fighting this with all my might**

    this part of your poem is just majestic....A complete expression of your struggle to be, but a fantastic voicing of your will and determination to keep going, to not give up.

    I love this poem, 5/5 all the way.....GR8 WRK!!!

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