The Dawning Of Dreams

by Melissa   Sep 11, 2007


Dreams

are falling
from my hair

one by one
they leap off each strand
as if midnight's abstractions
sprouted legs
for a singular purpose

to jump into something
more appealing than dawn,
but to where

I ogled their little figures
like a critic
would stare through grading
an exquisite painting,
just in case eyes might lose
their scuffling whereabouts

then quickly
all at once
they nuzzled themselves
beneath my "Dreams do come true" pillow,

perhaps to sleep or...

I'm grasping to the notion that
last night's images will fade away
just like love

and those so called dreams
will filter their screams
into something less scary than fear
at least before Bella Luna
sprinkles her slumber
upon my stupefied brows

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Maybe I am just stupid but some of it totally lost me....but the part I understood was good =)

  • 16 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    Cuteee♥
    i love it
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this poem is excellently written, with amazing and vivid imagery and great metaphors. I like it from the beginning to the end, and I like the choice of words in it a lot.
    Superb atmosphere through the whole poem.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This is so unique piece, it has excellent rhythm and you created some special tone in to this one. It is fantastic, you wrote it greatly. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by limp

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