Loveless soul

by stuart s   Sep 11, 2007


Her eyes have become tainted
and no longer make me whole
she is now changing
into a loveless soul
she seems to be different
each time we talk
making me wonder
should i stay or should i walk
off the edge of this mountain
and end it here
wanting to know where i stand
her not loving me is what i fear
but it seems to be this way
the way she seems to feign
away from the conversation we have
about me and her together again

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  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Nicely expressed love is not llove if alteration finds - shakespear

  • 16 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    I enjoyed reading this, i liked the mysterious vibe this poem has when you read it.
    Good write :)

    4/5