MY BETRAYAl

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Sep 12, 2007


I lost your friendship wayy before you left.
yet you think of it as my betrayal.
when you're the one who chose some guy.
& to keep our friendship, that you failed.
i knew this would occur.
before you were enlightened.
you thought of it as gibberish.
and our friendship knot untightened.
like i was making some big deal.
just some fuss about this guy.
yet you're the one too blind to see.
the truth beyond your eyes.
the useless fights and arguments.
causing nothing but more conflicts.
you try not to resolve but just to end.
& no one's fooled by your meaningless tricks.
your view of life.
expands as far as you believe.
the friendship that you created.
you eventually deceived.
he is more important to you than the friendship we shared.
& you let this friendship die.
but if you really didn't care.
all you had to do. .was say goodbye.

-this was from the top of my head.
i was angry. so i had to do something. "/.
it started out as angry. but ended. .
sorrowful. .remorseful.
comment&vote please.
ill return the favor! :]]

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  • 16 years ago

    by broken reflection

    I can tell that you put a lot of emotion whether it angry or remorse into it
    5/5 for the passion of your poem
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow that was great i esspesially liked the "your view of life.
    expands as far as you believe.
    the friendship that you created.
    you eventually deceived."
    part.good job!!!= ) 5/5

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awww, this poem is pretty touching, and im sure alot of people has the same experience. thanks for writing about it. great job! i loved it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aussie

    Lov is sad. that must be harsh. the poem hav good flow. ur feeling expaned in this poem. gr8 job:)

  • 16 years ago

    by If 0nLi u Kn3w

    Nice...tat happend to me w/ my "supposly best friend"

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