Buried Identity

by Veamm   Sep 12, 2007


Buried Identity

unknown profiles
scattered around
making nonsense
giggling a sound

some heads covered
with a plastic bags
to trapped voices
wanting to fad

information's block
vague and formless
to conceal issues
to hide such madness

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  • 16 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    The title of this poem really caught my eye, it's great :)
    The poem flows very easily and you used just the exact words to express the things you wanted to say.
    I loved the last two lines in the last stanza, great usage of words.

    5/5

    xo angelique

  • 16 years ago

    by elmahdy

    So well expressed u r so talented

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i don't know what to say, it was perfectly written and well thought of. it was beautiful. a bit depressing but i still loved it. 5/5

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