Being positive

by Veamm   Sep 12, 2007


Being positive

Retaining my momentum
to build determination
the rational essentials
of positive conception

naked hands hardened
to show perseverance
critical motivation
to improve my balance

my desired inclination
surge my self-control
force any movements
the will of my soul

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    I really like this poem. it had a good flow and i just thought it was TERRIFIC!!!! it had emotion and i like that in poems! GREAT JOB! keep it up!

    BabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I think that this is really good. i think that the flow was really good. everything seemed to flow together wonderfully. i think that this poem send s a powerful message...

    perfect emotion!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by elmahdy

    So well picked words helping the meaning and aslo giving the fantastic sound to ur poem

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, your poems are amazing. how do you think of these topics to write about. the way you put it together is great. 5/5

    my desired inclination,
    surge my self-control,
    force any movements,
    the will of my soul.

    my fave lines ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by turtle

    That was a great poem!...

    the flow was great and the words you used fit and described perfectly the emotion of your poem...

    keep writing and thanks for the comment!

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