Being me

by Jenie   Sep 12, 2007


It hurts to breath
and hard to live
nice to bleed
and not to give

rough to keep strong
and hard to stay
fighting all challenges
and dying each day

wake up with a frown
go to sleep with tears
living in the box
breathing in fear

cry from the pain
cut from the past
slicing each vain
pain needing to last

try to hold on
but its not so easy
you live my life
try being me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    A truly heartbreaking write, that I'm sure many including myself can relate to.

    "wake up with a frown
    go to sleep with tears
    living in the box
    breathing in fear"

    ^ Love those lines. Wonderful job. :]] Overall: 5.5

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.