Equality

I thought it was okay. When I read it, it didn't seem to flow very well. 3.

I see now that you have developed a style
This poem does describe equality well and I like your style

I thought this was another great poem by you, it just portrays the equality and the inequiality, nice job

"balanced, no superiority
having a right to choose
all born with dignity
having the same purpose"

favorite part ^^

and also this poem is to good for someone to leave a oneline r like the person ahead of me

This feels kind of dark, but it still works very much! I like it. 5/5

Once agian i think that this was nicely done.. my fav. lines were

"balanced, no superiority
having a right to choose
all born with dignity
having the same purpose"

i think that just that speaks so much. i really enjoys reading your poems.... Keep writing... you are amzing

5/5