Real Life Fairytale

by aDORKable x3   Sep 15, 2007


I wished on a star for something I didn't really mean -
I knew that this love wasn't all what it seemed.
I gave you a heart that wasn't worth taking;
You held me on a string that was already breaking.
We were destined for failue, right from the start =
Our minds were in it, but not our hearts.
Playing the game we both loved too much -
Only wanting the pleasure from a simple touch.
Lust was born out of our desires -
Passions fueled the buring fires;
But we were built up on some false pretenses,
Both secretly wishing to come to our senses.
Broken-down lovers, filled with such lust -
We're both losing the other who we thought we could trust.
We tried so hard, but in the end, we failed -
I guess this is what you call a Real Life Fairytale

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Beautiful! i loved it! keep writing and ill keep reading!

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh I love this poem ! The only thing I found off in it is as that the title seemed kind of forced into the poem and the over-all idea of fairy tale was mispercieved...fairytales have happy endings mister ! Lol, great poem though, loved it.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Nicely penned, you have transfered your thoughts into it, thats great..and title suits your topic well..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow...I really liked your thoıghts..Because they are all so true and everybody can relate to it

    My fave lines are;

    Broken-down lovers, filled with such lust -
    We're both losing the other who we thought we could trust.
    We tried so hard, but in the end, we failed -

    So beatifully penned;
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

    ~Kristina

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