Comments : Dark Angel [Tyburn]

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A very profound peace with an outstanding flow

  • 14 years ago

    by Nix

    Very effective poem, I enjoy in it. You created incredible atmosphere with so little words and rhythm of this piece is very powerful. Your wording is great, to be honest I never read this form of poetry but you truly did fantastic job. Well done! You wrote impressing piece.

  • 14 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I've done one of these before! Mine wasn't as good as yours though :P

    This was excellent. I loved the words you used. Flowed very nicely. For your first attempt this is very good. Your a natural with this form of poetry.
    Great Job! 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 14 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I like this alot.. very nice job. i enjoyed reading this one very much

  • 14 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. i never saw this type of poem before, so i like it a lot. it was well written. it must of took you long. good job! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 14 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Nice poem, its very brave of you that you tried something new. I think you did a good job. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    A very effective first attempt. This was very good for a first, and I really enjoyed it:)
    I applaud you for trying a new style.
    And therefore, I give you 5/5

    Keep it up,
    Elaine.

  • 14 years ago

    by Shauna

    Brilliant! Escpecially for your first attempt!!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 14 years ago

    by broken reflection

    I really liked it
    It was short but remaind gripping
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Short but to the point. I never heard of this type of poetry before, but you did a great job. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle

    Nice job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Well honestly im not familiar with this kind of poetry..but its very descriptive..

    Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I've never seen this style before, but you mastered it beautifully...
    I particularly love the ending, it was strong and intense, really wrapped the poem up and gave it a beautiful, stunning effect.

  • 14 years ago

    by Gem

    Now this a true tyburn!
    A much better attempt than anything i've ever done! lol
    Well done!
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 14 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, so powerful and effective, whole poem is simply amazing! You said so much with so little words and created stunning atmosphere.
    Truly unique poem.
    5/5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You style of writing is very similar to mine except better than what I could describe! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    GREAT! You did a tyburn!!! very dark words, and i like that, keep it up 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I really like this one :) Very strong, very powerful. Again you have a magnificent word choice. You could choose the simple words to get your point across but you choose the strong ones. Your imagination seems limitless.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very good, indeed.

    Not only have you followed the form perfectly, but you've presented a beautiful, painful picture as well.

  • 14 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Wow, you're really good at this type of poetry :) this is the first time I've actually read one, well done.

    Keep up the good work.