Your voice

by Baby Rainbow   Sep 16, 2007


Your voice says who you are
thats what people say
with the little i have heard
i'll tell you yours today

your words so kind and friendly
make me feel warm inside
gentle and caring comforting words
shows your arms are open wide

the way you greet and welcome me
makes me feel i belong
your voice is your gift
that says : i'm loving true and strong

saffie
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  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Alone

    Wow really deep, so good thanx for the comment on my poem too, this is me saying thanx, I return the fave :)

    -Thorn (Mia)

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow...this explans so much in my life. Thatwas beautiful please keep writing....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ThreeSixtyChanges

    Nice poem, i like it!

    thx for rating my poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Great poem! & thanks for the comment. :] much appreciated.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written piece, very interesting. I think that you should capitalize I, except that the rest of the poem is great.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Your voice says who you are
    thats what people say
    with the little i have heard
    i'll tell you yours today -

    Keep up, 5/5 from me