Take A Rope And Tie It Tight

by Kristina   Sep 17, 2007


I got the blade in my hand,
Ready to press it on my wrist.
I got tears in my eyes
And I'm thinking about suicide.

I cut so deep, I bleed for hours,
Laying on the floor,
I'm not sure what I should do.

Should I call someone for help
Or should I just lay here and die?
Would it even matter to anyone?
Would anyone even cry?

I don't see a reason for living,
There's no point in life,
I've got nothing good going for me.

I'll just take a rope and tie it tight
around my throat.
Tonight will be the day I die,
I can finally be happy where I am.

Copyright © March 03, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I hope you don't feel this way :( it's really sad when I see people trying to end their life.

    Anyway the flow was smooth, good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Layla

    I really like it, I can relate so much to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angela

    Wow it was soo vivid and sooo sad..u really got me with this poem..great great job..and thanks soo much for commenting/voting on my poem!
    take care

    Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Although i enjoy poems that rhyme more then poems that don't this poem was still filled with raw energy and an unsteady emotion. whatever draws you to write a poem in emotion will generally make an original or fantastic idea.

    Although your rhythm wasn't steady through out i find this piece unusual and original so ill give you a 5 because im sick of the same poems i read everyday.

    keep smilin' kiddo and know that I will be here if you need to tlak or vent rather then tkaing it out on your beautiful skin that your mother blessed you with.
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Aww this is an icy, breath taking piece. Sends shivers down your spine when you imagine it. Its scary to be holding the blade. Fantastic poem! 5/5

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