Yesterday

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Sep 18, 2007


They towed my car today
There was a fine; I had to pay
I had to go to school this morning
Asleep I fell; written up with no warning
Later on I missed the bus
Of course my teacher heard me cuss
I was late for mother's dinner
Her patience was getting thinner
"Young man you're grounded! To your room!"
The words I thought were; doom doom doom
It's time to put myself to bed
I wake from a nightmare to bump my head
Not a great way to start my day
Let's hope it's no worse than yesterday

I think it's an alright poem. It's not one of my best and the syllables don't keep up but I thought it was cute.

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  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I didnt like this one all too much,, it didnt raelly do anythign for me....

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Eh, i didn't like this one too much, you were just talking about way too many things and it's like all together =/. but the rhyming was pretty good =] 4/5