Contradicting Words; True Feelings.

by ABake   Sep 22, 2007


It's time to move on, I am sorry but we are really thru.
I don't want to let go, I really do love you.
But I can not do it anymore, it hurts to walk away.
I can't exactly think, so many things I still need to say.

Tears continue to fall, I repeat the same three words.
Put your arms around me, one last kiss for the records.
Stop; let's stay in this moment forever. Do not move.
Your love is something you never needed to prove.

One more day; don't let go, stay right there.
Look me in the eyes, tell my soul you still care.
What am I saying? I do not want to move on.
I toss and turn all night, and fall asleep around dawn.

I wake up to your voice; it will always get me through.
In the silence, you whisper "I love you."
I smile, grab your hand and say "I love you too."
You kiss me, again, and again, I am not through.

[The title, I feel suits this peice well. I hope everyone understands where exactly my emotion is coming from. For me, this peice was difficult to write yet easy because the words and actions came right from my soul. I hope everyone enjoys]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    This poem is confusing, i get what you mean thought that it came from your heart, and that's what matters most, and sometimes those words from our hearts just don't make sense. this poem i just couldn't follow it went back and forth too much... i think if you broke up each stanza, like each one represented the different feelings, not mixing them into one stanza, that was what confused me the most. nice poem though, i liked it, great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    This is a really good poem... i really liked it, and i can totally understand. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh, It's beautifully sad. Atmosphere you created with this poem got all over my soul, aww, it is so so touching, and that kind of poems go streight from heart, I love this piece. Deep emotions are breathing from every line.
    Flawless write for me.
    5/5 Though I think this deserves more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Ooo. I love this one. It's probably my favorite out of all three, though I don't quite know. Lol. :)

    It was so beautifully written & the emotions were so heartbreaking yet lovely at the same time.

    "It's time to move on, I am sorry but we are really thru."
    ^^ My only complaint is to change that to "through". Sorry, but I tend to be a grammer freak at times. :D

    Fabulous job, deary. (: 5.5
    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 18 years ago

    by Calla Spalding

    I absolutely loved it.
    I know exactly where your coming from.
    Twisted and confused emotions...
    But then you begin to realize you don't want to leave...
    they are who you want to stay with.
    They are the ones you love.
    You did a great job!!

    :]

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