The Pain's cruel will

by isabel   Sep 22, 2007


Can you hear her call?
Can you feel it in your skin?
How she wants to let you fall
She's the pain, she'll be your sin

She will be there, when you sleep
In your nightmares, she shall hide
And if, one day, you cut too deep
She will lead you to suicide

She wants your life, nothing less
You'll scream until you fade away
She makes of reality a mess
So that there's no reason to stay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittiny

    I really liked your poem it is short but to the point you still paint a picture of what is going on. well thanxs for the comment. keep up the work, i like the style you write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh amazing! I just loved how you called pain she, brilliant. The title again helped me with it, making all clearer.I really like it how you use title for it! Imagery strong and it had a sad tone to it.
    Enjoyful read!
    5/5 Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    Very good! I like it.

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