Mr. Sad Eyes

by Rayne   Sep 24, 2007


Mr. Sad Eyes
Tell me what you see
When you close your eyes
There are so empty

Can you explain where the joy
Went as it left your eyes
So it could be taken over
By all the painful lies

Mr. Sad Eyes do you wonder
Where all the hurt was made
Turn your color back to blue,
Before the light starts to fade

Mr. Sad Eyes scream a loud
as the oxygen burns your throat.
Do you feel like your drowning?
Is it hard to stay a float?

Mr. sad eyes
it'll all be over soon
As you walk the lonely road
And the blood seeps through the wound

Hey, there Mr. Sad Eyes
You're walking on broken glass
Cutting deeper in your head,
you wear a fragile mask.

Tell me what to see
As the color starts to die
Burn those beautiful blues,
as you close Mr. Sad Eyes.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I reallyty love the beginning but the tempo has gone down in the latter part I loved the para

    Can you explain where the joy
    Went as it left your eyes
    So it could be taken over
    By all the painful lies

    this speaks a lot

    Try to add a uniformity

    rest I wont say it was the best of the poems I would have readbut certainly its none less than 5/5

    Keep it up

    Good work

    If you want me to criticize why it lacks than let me know

    take care,
    Roxiee