True Sorrows

by Sandra D   Sep 26, 2007


I just don't understand
Why you did what you did.
I mean, after all,
You were still just a kid.

You took a chance,
One you knew would end bad.
You stopped taking your meds
And they were all ou ever had.

I guess you had enough,
You just got fed up with life.
So you took one final jump
While I answer to the knife.

You were all i ever had.
Now what can I do?
I'll do anything possible,
Cause I just want to be with you.

I'm writing this for them.
One last thing before I go,
To tell them not to miss me,
And not to let their true sorrows show.

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i finished Impulse (the book) a while back and i hated the ending so much that i had to write a poem... :]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    A truly immaculate poem! The way it was written, the flow, the word choice, and the concept were all flawless! I really loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Beautiful piece!

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Maybe i should read that book it would give me some ideas. you think that i would need any helpfull ideas since we bothread each others poems? ah well anyway ou needs to be you but that is baout it nice poem:~)Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Ooo. I <3 you right now.
    I just finished reading Impulse a couple weeks ago. I think it was an amazinggg book. :P

    Back to the poem:
    It was great, really. The flow was flawless, the emotions were strong, & the word usage was great. Fantastic job! :) Overall: 5.5

    --- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I agree it is beautifully written and certainly encompasses a lot of emotions. I would however disagree that it is too dark to be termed lovely as you use such soft words to convey such raw emotion.
    Lovely piece:)

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