Hidden Story

by Spirit   Oct 1, 2007


In some dusty corner
hidden from your eyes
underneath your bed
is a forgotten paradise

A secret place with silence
here, no one will yell
For here a story lies
that someone wants to tell

Four walls can hold a story
each one different than the last
So come on listen closer
to a tale from the past

Pay close attention
look for things you can't find
Sit in a dusty corner
let it fill your mind

Don't worry about the world
and when ever you get home
don't think about the noise
but do something on your own

Then when the world does come to view
and everything remains the same
remember that one moment
of the day when you were sane

Think of when you heard about
many ships with daunting sails
think of when you would listen
to someone else's tales

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh how I love this piece.

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    This is just beautiful. Beautiful.
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    Imagery was beautifully done, and the flow was FLAWLESS throughout the whole piece.

    Just...perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was such an enjoyable read. Really creative. I found it to be really interesting and the flow was almost trancing. Written with such simplicity though flowing so smoothly. The effect you created from this poem was calm. Liked the meaning portrayed. Overall a nice read. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I can see the creativity in your poem. It flows so well and is written the best. The consecutive rhyming is perfect and its just 5/5 I can give you ;)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Wonderfully written and I liked your choice of words. You expressed yourself wonderfully. The rhyming was great and the flow was flawless.
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    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought it was great, and the wording
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