Heartless Rubble.

by Teria   Oct 1, 2007


With colored lights of gold rushing past my heart,
I feel the wounded sorrow tearing you to shreds.
As little foundations rise up beyond belief,
I see your eyes turn the color of crimson with tears.
And, finally I realize it's but a nightmare within a nightmare,
haunting what's become of us, tearing us to shreds.
And, I feel the terror stinging in my eyes,.
Filling my soul with such heartless rubble,
of which never ends, piling upon each pile.
With wounds never to even heal,
I watch us fall apart, tearing me to shreds.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    Oh my where have YOU been hiding?! I have been reading this for hours I was once very active (They took away 2 of my awards!)just got back on. THIS is one of the BEST ones I've read on here so far. You have TALENT. The flow is great The POWER the Passion The PAIN..WHATEVER you do KEEP writing!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    I completely fell for the words you used here, such a delicate and sad experience, yet so beautifully penned.Keep writing..5/5
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I really enjoyed this peice. The emotion was not overbearing but I still felt it. Which is great.

    I always like non rhyming poems. Lol. If that makes sense. I think that it adds extra emotion into a peice. As it does for this particular peice.
    Great job =))
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I like the nightmare within a nightmare part, curioous.

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Another peacful and graceful ambiance in the poem.. but though u still manage to bring up the sad emotion in this one. your wordings kept the simplicity of with intense potray or scenario.. keep up the good work

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