New Inspiration

by Corruption   Oct 2, 2007


Another one long distance,
though in the same time zone.

I love how she laughs,
I love how she talks.

She can speak with and accent,
And claims tis real,
Although i don' t believe so.

She's nice and funny,
She can sing, write and draw.

Time truly flies,
When i speak with her.

I've known her for so long,
But in a way,
I'm just starting to know her.

And now she might be...
My new inspiration.

*dont know if this is any good
please tell the truth when commenting and rating*

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  • 16 years ago

    by hippiehxc

    Thank you for reading it to me, Keenan. :]
    Always,
    Miss Charlotte.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Im not entirely sure on how I feel about this poem. All your poems are good, it's just this particulary peice reads like you just wrote it to write it.
    It like a shell with out the egg; empty.
    I think if you used more description, and added to it, the poem would improve.

    Still a good write though,
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rusheena

    What up K. nice poem; I'm sorry dat I haven' t been on in a while, but I can only use the internet in school when I can. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    I liked it so I guess that's good:S:S Depending on what you think of moi I guess but you have my vote on it's being good I like it I like that your writting again too!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Yay ur writing again...

    love the poem its very well done and sweet :)
    i find it different from some of the others but its really good

    ashleigh

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