Just Lingering

by Independence Forever   Oct 3, 2007


I never thought this night could be so dark
where once was flame, not even a spark

we complemented each other, why did it have to end?
ever since that sad dear john, why did you press send?

now it's over, there's no hope left
i feel as if my sad heart was theft

you no longer return my calls, you burn my love letters
I'm really that bad, can you only describe me as fetters?

my heart is broken, if ever it will heal
nothing is good again, i can not feel

i guess this is goodbye,hard to open that door
my life has been crushed, I'm dead to the core

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a very good poem atticus,
    love the imagery and the flow tis perfect,
    i give this one a flawless 5/5!!!
    keep them coming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Awww.. i love this one!! awesome job.. you have some real talent... i just read this one and now i can't wait to read what else you have...this is kinda how i feel right now... i love it!! keep up the amazing work!