My everything

by azii   Oct 3, 2007


Everything is wrong
i feel so lost
yeah i trusted love
now this is the cost

everything went wrong
just from the start
now i'm supposed to pay
by having this broken heart

everything i had
now has been taken away
there is nothing left
no. i'm no longer okay

my everything left me
tell me, what should i do
i made someone my everything
who wasn't to be true

my everything is gone
can't do nothing but wait
he may never come back
what a miserable fate

some say don't give up
you still may find true love
one who'd really love you
one sent from above

but he was my everything
and now he is gone
i might live or i might die
he'll be my only one

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Wow thiz poem is good
    ~my everything left me
    tell me, what should i do
    i made someone my everything
    who didn't know how to be true~
    and the lt line is my fav.
    awsume poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    It's written beautifully and shows your feelings. the ryhm is nice and the rhythm as well
    and another thing i like
    in different stanzas there're different thoughts
    but you unite them by this repetition "everything"
    keep it up))

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Wow, this poem took my breatn away, it is truely amazing, your wording and flow is brilliant

    i really do hope you keep it up
    xxolish

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitty kat

    This a really good one i feeel the same way, i how it is

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    I think this is very good you did a great job at it i feel the same

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