Hypothesis

Catchy little rhymes you had in this poem. It sort of brings me back to my highschool days where I would have to do a hypothesis for science labs. Gah, I did not like science much. I also like the fact that you brought it into your life. Crazy how life can be sometimes. Never really have it figured out.

Ahh I loved thouse discriptions and thouse lines just flowed so perfectly. Deep poem, you really know how to touch with your words. And specialy loved the ending!
5/5 Keep up!

This was a very original and abstract piece. I enjoyed the word usage and the imagery you created. Well done *5/5*

Loved the concept of this. the meaning of it was real deep, the words you used were perfect and i absolutely loved it. nice work 5/5

nikki

I love the concept of this. It's very original, which is refreshing to read. The flow was flawless, and the short stanza's said so much for what they were. To me, there isn't all that much emotion in this, yet it was still excellent. I can't find a fault at all. Well done. 5/5 from me.

Tammie