Emotionless Emotions.

by ABake   Oct 5, 2007


Another poem, another repetition of emotions.
To me, they are all the same. Nothing changes.
I write and the tears continue to fall.
Yet, I feel no emotion.
I wonder where you're going,
Even where you have been; you're still mine.
I stare at this paper; just a bunch of jumbled thoughts.
It stares back saying....
"Fill me with your words; I dare you"
I can't resist a challenge, so once again I write.
I write till I can no longer think.
I lay back, amazed at what I have wrote.
Yet, I feel nothing.
I am fearless, yet...
I am scared of everything.
My feelings are at a stand still.
Nothing changes; I am emotionless.
But, I feel as if I am drowning in my own feelings.
It does not make any sense...
But I have taken your challenge,
Blank paper, I have won,
For you are not blank anymore...
Your filled with my emotionless emotions.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "where your going," << you're.
    "your still mine." << you're.

    "It stares back saying....
    "Fill me with your words; I dare you""
    ANNNNDDD.
    "Blank paper, I have won,
    For you are not blank anymore...
    Your filled with my emotionless emotions."

    AMAZING AMBER.
    Amazing, no joke. I loved it. At first I thought I wouldn't. Usually the whole no stanza thing doesn't appeal to me because it seems like a bunch of jumbled thoughts. Forgive me for judging thogh. IT WAS AMAZING.

    I loved it.
    I think, I loved it so much because I can relate 100% to this. And, so can many many other poets.

    Amazing.
    Kiu. (: