Now how do I?

Now how do I start this poem differently
In what way can I make you believe in me
Listen to this man
Sit down on your knees
Fold your hands
Give me them tearful plea's
I'm an angel's envy
A demons fear
My hands are empty
My smile's a tear
These eyes are like oceans
And my heart is bleeding emotions
Upon these lips of mine
I can taste you crying
We'll twist and turn together
Just you and me
Somehow the pain will last no more
No more than eternity.