Past Closed Doors.

by ABake   Oct 9, 2007


No clue why I am feeling this pain.
I thought I would be fine after a while.
My composure I can not regain.
Someone; Anyone; Help me...

Sleep does not come easy anymore,
No one ever realizes.
They do not dare look past closed doors.
Someone; Anyone; Look...

Tears, they fall almost every day,
My happiness is artificial.
I try, but my pain just won't go away.
Someone; Anyone; I am pleading...

Someone, anyone, no one is here.
I am all alone.
My pen and paper are the only ones near.
My life is slowly....fading....

[My words say it all...hope you enjoy]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "clue why I am feeling this pain"
    ^^ Usually I'm quite fond of the AM instead of I'm, because it's more powerful, more bam. But in this poem . . . I think I believe differently. There's always exceptions for everything, eh.

    " Someone, anyone, no one is here."
    ^^ ". . . anyone - no one. . . "

    Hmm. I really like this, darling. It's quite a good poem. With deep emotion, and great words. The flow is good as well. (:

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