Maybe Someday

by Adam   Oct 10, 2007


Love is like a candy, that I've never had,

Something Foreign to me, something I want bad.

Maybe someday, I'll get that second glance,

This will be the girl, that I ask to dance.

I'll treat her with respect and never leave her side,

I'll cherish her and hold her,a love I cannot hide.

I'll listen, I'll laugh, I'll play, I'll fight,

Just for that someone to say goodnight.

But until that day, alone I will stay,

Hoping and praying it won`t be this way,

It's really hard sometimes to be all alone,

Not once had a girl to call my own,

So this is the end for you my friend,

You'll never fall in love, an unfortunate end.

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  • 15 years ago

    by isabel

    You didn't actually stated what poem you wanted to be commented, so i just picked this one...

    loved your first comparison... it was very well thought and original...

    Your whole poem has an extreme sadness I can completely relate to... Although it seems like love is never going to knock on our door, it is only a matter of time...

    I am pretty sure that you will fall in love sometime... Fate is something quite tricky...

    don't know if you noticed... but you wrote a sonnet... :) not the regular kind of sonnets... (rhyme scheme is a little bit different...)
    maybe you'll be known someday by the invention of a new sonnet ;)

    quite original structure, i must say...

    your poem is really well written... incredibly sad, though

    *keep up*
    isabel

    (i noticed you only posted 3 poems yet... have you thought of posting a little more? ;) )

  • 15 years ago

    by mysterious

    Your poems are really good, they flow so well and truelly portray your feelings to the reader. very sad tough...best of luck :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    I really like this poem . X

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