All those thoughts leave you feeling empty

by Byron   Oct 11, 2007


The cold wind sends a dead shiver down my spine
The concrete grounds get harder over time
My eyes lose sight look far beyond the trees
I watch as they die and the seasons steal the comfort of leaves
I see gaps in the clouds but no sunlight
I feel the coldness of silence and dark nights
I was planning on wishing stars
I was planning on fixing these scars
I was planning on over coming and moving on
I was planning on dreaming but that idea is gone
I will sleep drenched in dead dreams
I will awake in empty sheets

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  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Very emotional and had a great flow :) it was very well written and used a good choice of words, great work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marylou L

    I like it. your flow was good and you didnt blab. you write wonderful. keep up the good work. 5/5 :)