The Embodiment of True Love

This poem is so sweet :) i really loved how you described your love for her. she's lucky to have you. The only compliant I have:

So that together we will be never bored

bored isn't a strong word maybe you can change it?

I absolutely loved this:

With eyes warm as love
I listen to a song she made
I can sit by her for hours
Listening to her sweat serenade

excellent

5/5

The emothion in this poem is very strong you have also created some very beautiful imagery very well written 5/5

I liked this poem, it was simple and sweet which portrayed such loving emotions over the atmosphere while reading it. A heartfelt poem which expressed your emotions nicely and captured the reader. Overall an enjoyable read none the less. Well done. ~Mel

Awww this poem was soo beautiful!! i love how you described your love, and how you could sit by her for hours. beautiful magical poem! great job! 5/5

Well written, Words it seems straight from the heart. Good use of metaphors.Simple, yet effective rymthes..

What can I say, its a good write, and an excellent read.

Keep it up,
--Elly.