All The Pretty Faces.

by Teria   Oct 15, 2007


All The Pretty Faces.

Your mind runs faster than your mouth,
not keeping up with everything that's said-
ruining what could have been;
Keep the pace, darling; slow and steady.

The look in her eyes says " I got`chu."
With fear rushing about your blood stream,
you move, and move and move
until you're out of breath.

They beat at you like a bat's wings,
harder and faster, harder and faster.
The pain is outrageous, and you can't outrun it-
or in this case out fly it.

You're not fly enough for all the pretty faces.
You're ruining what could have been ,
You're falling so far behind the crowd,
and everything is rushing back to you-
the hopeless never win.
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Any idea on the genre? - I have no clue.

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  • 16 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    To answer the question at the end, I must admit no idea as to a genre whatsoever. To a point there are times where I begin to get lost as to what the idea behind the words is and then I pick it up again. This poem is interesting to me because when I read it I know what the idea is and what the words mean, but if asked to describe it I couldn't. Haunting in a way. Very nice write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written piece, very deep.
    Every stanza is so effective, I like the message that you portrayed here. Whole piece is unique and it has vivid descriptions. I like the ending stanza it adds great effect to the whole poem.
    Very captivating, from the beginning to the end. The flow is flawless, too.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This poem has left me with a little lack of understanding, which is actually a feeling I really enjoy. It was simple but still obviously full of depth. Excellent work

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