Fallen Relationships

by Shinobi   Oct 17, 2007


Don't know why
All of my relationships are fallen
It ends the same way every time I try
And my heart keeps getting stolen

Lots of relationships had past
Had lots of girls whom I fell for
All my efforts always turned to dust
Because I always wanted more

I can't find love anywhere
There is no one out there to love me
Every time I fall for someone
She won't let the relationship be

Have two beautiful friends
Both are smart and kind
One has a guy
And with the other I can't bind

I need someone
A person who'll show me the way
Lost in the endless sands of desperation
Waiting for one glory day...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    All you have to do is be patient love will come. It always does. You did a really great job on this one. I have no complaints at all. It was beautfiully written.

    my fav lines:

    It ends the same way every time I try
    And my heart keeps getting stolen

    Great Read

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    I need someone
    A person who'll show me the way
    Lost in the endless sands of desperation
    Waiting for one glory day...

    loved the last stanza!! good poem btw. i love how you write about how you feel about this subject, but i didnt think the part about your friends didnt really fit. idk, it could just be me. i give ya a 4/5 great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Aww sad! i love it though.. it shows the endless thought patterns of many teenagers. great job putting that to words.. i really liked it! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Expressed Clearly. The flow was excellent, the word choice good.
    The poem itself written on a relatable topic.

    ' Keep your head up, and keep searching, your day will come when you are blessed by true love'

    --Elly.

  • Sad, yet very awesome. I loved this poem a lot. 5/5

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