Long Love Mataphor

by CrossMyHeartAndHopeToDie   Oct 18, 2007


Love is like food

There's good food and there's bad food
There's food that looks good
... Until you put it in your mouth
And its tastes horrible
Sometimes leaving a bad taste in your mouth
Making you not want to taste anything else like it
Or with similar ingredients

And then you have the types of food
That's looks like you wouldn't like it
Cause it's not your thing
But your friend tastes it
And moans to you how delicious it is
And you should have tried it ... but you didn't
And now it's gone
So you're stuck with the bad food
You thought was good
You can't spit it out cause that's rude at a dinner table
So you keep chewing hoping it'll get a little better
Knowing it wont
Knowing is the difference
And it's so bad that you end up chocking on it
And everyone knows how to do CPR, but they don't
And they all sit there and stare
While you choke
And choke until ...

Wait, is this still about love???

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Lol that was funny

  • 16 years ago

    by Used n Confussed

    I really like this...so wierd...but great to read!
    && true as well.
    wow..this is really really good!
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Yeah this is still about love...lol..love makes you die inside a little more each time you feel it happen and know it's lost-good work..a lil different,but good. Keep it up!:)

  • 16 years ago

    by shannon

    This is a funny poem
    i liked how u made love relate to food
    i really liked it
    good job
    i give it a 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    That Was Awesome,, So Unique To All Other Poemz I Have Read But I Really Like It..
    Keep It Up
    perfectlyBROKEN xx 5/5

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